Should the fire brigade be able to strike on fire works night ?

[crimeRhyme]

should the fire brigade be able to strike on fireworks night ?

i am not prepared to even consider,
striking on this day should make even the unions shiver.
this is pure blackmail and is not hansom,
how dare the fire brigade hold the UK to ransom.
it was not to long ago when you were on strike,
fair play back then as we never told you get on your bike.
but a repeat performance is taking the mickey,
don't guarantee on support, its now sticky.
you have now shot yourself in your boots,
OK they may be steel toe capped, but public support is not at roots.
number 10 have said strong words, wreck-less and cynical,
and if any firefighter gets out of this unhurt, its a miracle.
this poem has to end, my flame and the Joe is burning,
lets just hope every fire fighter can sleep well and not hear there conscience turning.



( not sure what you lot think on here but the joe is thinking this is bang out of order )

[Ignitionnet]

My only thought is that you should go back to primary school and learn to write poetry there.

As a general guide do pay some attention to the syllables in each line, just the last word rhyming isn't adequate.

I worked out what your name means. Your rhymes are criminal, and not in a 'cool' way.

[danielf]

Spelling lessons wouldn't hurt either (not so much in this one, but previous ones were pretty atrocious). Anyway, there's a perfectly good thread on the subject here.

[Tezcatlipoca]

Dupe thread > Closed.

Original thread, complete with a link to a news article: http://www.cableforum.co.uk/board/20...de-strike.html