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Re: my poem.
lol this is my revised version. I have been told it sounds contrived, i guess i shouldnt give up my day job lol
"Water"
Soul capitulates guidance
Martyrdom quenches therein.
Expansion deluges in vein
Ascension barrages our loin
Senses mingle with the wind
Clouds impinge the hinterland
Tongues entangle the message
Water strangles the passage
Soul capitulates guidance
Martyrdom quenches therein.
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