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Originally Posted by Portly_Giraffe
Here's an initial draft of a flyer which could be sent to MPs to try to explain in non-technical terms what is happening and why it's wrong.
http://www.inphormationdesk.org/Phorm_Flyer_V1.pdf
Please everyone, review it for accuracy and effectiveness.
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On the plus side:
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Originally Posted by roadrunner69
Looks good to me PG. Covers all the main points factually and is not sensationalist or over technical.
Printed a couple off for the notice boards at work tomorrow (if thats ok?)
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plus a PM from another poster: "Very concise and informative. Thank you."
On the minus side:
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Originally Posted by serial
Remember MPs have already recieved the brief from BT, that brief is a single page and much simpler.
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Originally Posted by popper
sorry but it doesnt work for me... for effectiveness.
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we are fighting this with facts, but we need to use the tricks to grab the interest.
so soundbites are the order of the day, use quotes from the likes of K%nt and the press offices to make the point in small sections.
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So it appears we need a one-page, attention-grabbing, soundbite-based flyer. But I think the pdf at
http://www.inphormationdesk.org/Phorm_Flyer_V1.pdf still works well as a factsheet to back it up.
I'll work on the shorter, more emotionally-based version over the coming week.