Well if I was the hiring man I'd be too busy to view this sample, most employers prefer simple one page hard copy. The intro appears unprofessionally childish. The idea itself is novel and perhaps ought to be presented in a more adult manner. On the positive side, a good idea, I believe it's been done before, it shows the use of skills, the voice over needs work it's too fast. I would stick with the regular hard copy, let's face it many employers are not that progressive, such a presentation could only be used as a backup extra otherwise it would be sensible to stick to hard copy presentations.
