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Originally Posted by TehTech
Hey all!
I have spent since this afternoon making up a pc presentation application on my laptop that I thought I would burn and then send to friends & family and just about anyone I can think of to spread the word on Phorm...

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Just one thought - this is presumably aimed at the non-technical?
I don't know about anyone else but if I showed this to my parents they probably wouldn't get beyond the first page.
Anyway of breaking it up with images/video stills/diagrams etc - because other than that it makes all the required points. IMO there is possibly too much text.