[Portly_Giraffe]

Thanks to everyone who contributed ideas for the "simple" website. I do intend to change its name to make it more acceptable to organisations such as the BBC, and will let you know once that's in place.

In the mean time, here are some specific changes:

Originally Posted by popper

if your intent is to inform and educate these people, its probably good to highlight the Deep packet inspection,at the top,and include this from the http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Deep_packet_inspection …

Originally Posted by mark777

Portly, you have a great idea, but the first line can't go into deep packet inspection. They are not techies and will turn off.

popper – I agree about the importance of emphasising deep packet inspection. However, I also agree with mark777 and roadrunner69 that expressed as such it is too technical for ordinary users. So I have reworded the intro substantially.

However, at the end of the attributions I have added a prominent reference to the Wikipedia article, along with Richard Clayton’s recent paper.

I have made all these changes live at http://www.whyphormisbad.org and would welcome any further comments.