OK I have updated the article again, you can find it here:
http://www.paladine.org.uk/phorm_paper.pdf
I have now completed the first draft of the sections pertaining to RIPA, Privacy and Electronic Communications (European Directive) Regulations 2003 and Computer Misuse Act 1990 (Scotland).
I will be looking at Trespass to Chattels later today and then covering other aspects of the issue.
As always, feedback welcomed. I think I fixed the words with Americanised "ise" (ize) but let me know if you find any I missed (other than in quotes obviously).
Alexander Hanff