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Barkotron · 04-04-2008, 15:17

Thanks Alexander, I really think it's worth giving the PR teams as little foothold for dismissing what you're saying as possible. So stick as closely to known facts or published opinions as you possibly can, and don't let justifiable anger get in the way. Wow, now I feel like Yoda or Mr Miyagi or someone.

Small stylistic point, personally I'd not use words like "basically" (as in the bit about DPI on page 5). It doesn't add anything to the sentence and it's a bit conversational/informal. Also, readers can find it a little condescending.

04-04-2008, 15:17	#2238
Barkotron Inactive Join Date: Mar 2008 Posts: 46	Re: Virgin Media Phorm Webwise Adverts [Updated: See Post No. 1, 77, 102 & 797] Thanks Alexander, I really think it's worth giving the PR teams as little foothold for dismissing what you're saying as possible. So stick as closely to known facts or published opinions as you possibly can, and don't let justifiable anger get in the way. Wow, now I feel like Yoda or Mr Miyagi or someone. Small stylistic point, personally I'd not use words like "basically" (as in the bit about DPI on page 5). It doesn't add anything to the sentence and it's a bit conversational/informal. Also, readers can find it a little condescending.