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Re: Virgin Media Phorm Webwise Adverts [Updated: See Post No. 1, 77, 102 & 797]
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Originally Posted by AlexanderHanff
No offence intended here but it needs to be better written and should be published as an Open Letter.
Just my opinion and I appreciate someone has worked hard on it but the grammar is not great (and no I am not claiming to be a grammar expert, mine is pretty appalling).
Maybe some english and grammar experts could add their input and maybe refine the article into an Open Letter?
Alexander Hanff
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Yes - It was hastily written - I've tidied up some of the errors, perhaps you can point out if there should be something added or changed in the article to make it have more 'humph'. If you know what I mean. 
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