sounds like.. jean michel jarre vs jason nevins
Overall a bit too busy for me, but I'm fussy..
I'm a fan of the sampled drumbeat rather than synth drums too.. but again thats just me.
It didn't seem to have much "form" if you know what I mean.. the structure of the tune never really settled. I like a definate lead-in and lead-out with a good sized section in the middle where the beat is developed.
*It's far better than I could do though
what software did you use?