Video Help Please
 

Not sure if this is in the right category but wanted to see if any fellow NThell users would give me some help.

Ive entered a video for a competition which took me what seemed like eons to complete and its only 30 secs long

To cut a long story short if you had a spare minute would you mind giving me a vote please

http://www.laptopswelove.com/videos/...n-hear-youtype

Thanks in advance